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PMOL Contest: I'm So Sorry

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    Flurry Heart closes her chamber doors. If everything went according to plan, that would be the last time. Slowly she crept through the palace's empty halls. Cadence and Shining Armor often insisted that little security measure was needed to protect the family. They were only a few knights to guard the littlest one-
    As footsteps began echoing the halls, Flurry inwardly screamed at the thought of her plan being thwarted so soon forgetting her horn in a minute of panic, Flurry whipped around, looking for a suitable hiding spot. That is, until her little sister rounded the corner...crying.
    "L-la la," Skyla jumped as her elder sister spoke, not noticing her until the last possible moment,"What happened, are you okay?"
    "Ah?! Wh-what? Where did you come from?" Skyla, in her state of shock spoke in a blubbered and panicked state, before reforming her composure and restating, "I mean- What are you doing up at this hour?" Flurry didn't answer, instead, she checked Skyla's eyes and ears, making sure that her precious little sister was unharmed and safe. Shaking her sisters hooves off her, Skyla took a step back, and raised her voice a little louder, making sure not to disturb any lingering soul. "Answer my question! What are you doing awake at this time of night?" Flurry Heart, shocked for moment took a moment to respond.    
    "What are you doing up at this hour?" Skyla flinched. She hoped that her sister wouldn't notice.
    "U-uhmm I-"
    "Is it your lover?" Skyla stared agape at Flurry Heart. How could she have known? Skyla had been sure to hide this secret as meticulously as she could! Was Flurry spying on her-?
    "Don't think I didn't notice the spring in your step," Flurry Heart extending her wings, "You would smile extra wide after you flights." Skyla stammered something, not realizing how easily her sister had read her without realizing-
    "You were in love, weren't you? And he left you. Didn't he?" The silence of the halls seemed to extinguish any possibility of another sound. Skyla shook her head, and stared her sister in the eye as much she could.
    "I wasn't- You could't-"
    "You're crying, La la..." 
    At that moment, anything holding Skyla together that was left crashed down and she began sobbing, reaching for the warmth of her sister.
    "I'm so sorry, La la..." was all Flurry Heart could say. I bet I can take them in a fight she thought bitterly, no one makes my little sister cry like this...
    When Skyla was finally able to get a sentence together, she finally spoke, "They probably weren't right for you anyways," Flurry tried to tell her, "Anyone who dumps you is out of their mind!"
    Skyla sobbed, "N-no...Jin he..." Jin huh? Maybe she could track him down...especially when she was out-
    Oh. Right. Out. Longingly, Flurry Heart stared toward to the balcony opening. Outside. But her little sister sobbing in her arms couldn't be ignored. She could leave later, right?
    "H-how could you tell?" Flurry Heart glanced at her sister. She had calmed down a little. "You know all along he left me. How did you know?"
    "I'm pretty good at reading emotions- ehhh, good emotions! I could tell he left you because you were crying."
    Skyla looked down. "That would explain why you never noticed..." She trailed off mid sentence, thinking twice about her next word.
    "Noticed what?" 
    For a whole minute, Skyla hesitated, not knowing what to say. But finally, she spoke, knowing she could no longer delay the inevitable, "You're just so...perfect." That's when it all clicked for Flurry Heart. 
    "Oh, oh... I..." At lost for words, Flurry accidentally stepped away from her embrace with her sister and backed away. She flinched at seeing the hurt in Skyla's eyes. 
    "I-I didn't mean-" She tried to explain, but no words came out, instead a jumble messed of tied together words came out.
    "La- Skyla, I mean, it's not your fault I just..." She couldn't keep her sister like this. In her shadow. "I need to go out! She flashed her wings and ran to the balcony. She just couldn't keep Skyla in her shadow!\
    "W-wait! Flurry come back!" Flurry Heart hesitated. The heartbreak in her sisters voice. Was she really about to do this? Leave now instead of her longing for adventure but for her sister's own sake? She breathed. Yes. Yes she was.
    "I'm so sorry." She opened the balcony doors and flew out, sobbing as her sister left her sight, barely able to see, but knowing she just had to fly. I'm so so sorry...
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haha, of course I would take something that is supposed to be happy and uplifting, to depressing and morbid SpongeBob (Hahaha) 

For Lopoddity's contest 

Pandoraverse Art Contest


for real though it kind of turned into a teen romance around the end Stare 
But what matters is, I'm tired, it's almost 3 am and I'm thirsty. Gnite folks

Skyla (Right) belongs to Lopoddity 
Flurry Heart (Left) Belongs to MLP
I do not own the backround, but accidently deleted the tab it was in ;w;
all I remember is that Twilight's ass was in it
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